more and more information about lives of celebrities is now found in newspapers,magazines and online.why is this happening? what are drawbacks for the reading public?
Nowadays, in media, everywhere we find the gossip about celebrities' personal as well as private lives. Person life is getting more and more stressful day by day. People need some relaxation. This is might be result ,people are attract through extravagant lifestyle of celebrities.so to provide entertainment for people ,media release more information about the lives of celebrities in newspapers,magazines and online.There are some drawback to people if they try to follow their lives.
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Sentence: This is might be result , people are attract through extravagant lifestyle of celebrities.so to provide entertainment for people , media release more information about the lives of celebrities in newspapers, magazines and online.
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Sentence: All this matter provide them peace and enjoyment .
Description: The fragment matter provide them is rare
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Sentence: As a result ,most time spend on reading about celebrities' lives, definitely youngster mostly thinking about them.
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Sentence: Then I think individual spoil their career and future.as per my opinion ,there should talk show about celebrities' for students that they should have to concentrate on study rather than following their lives.
Description: The fragment individual spoil their is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace spoil with verb, past tense
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