More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is positive or negative?

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More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is positive or negative?

In modern era, people do not need to go to office and to school or college for working and studying. Now the people just sit in the chair in front of computer with internet connection, they can do their job and study from internet, and they can enjoy their job. I believe that have positive and negative side.

Generally, work in home is funny and enjoy, the people can do their job and study everytime when they want to do it, they just have a seat in the chair in front of computer or laptop with connection, and the people can get salary more than work in the office and no need to pay more to improve knowledges from the internet, it so easily because if people work in the office and study in university may be on the way they can meet problem such traffic jam, it will make them late to go to college or office.

However, work and study from Internet are interesting because if the parent work in the home they can meet and teach their children eveyday. Now, many people work and learn from home, and they enjoy it because they have opinion it easier than they must go to office or college for work and study.

In my opinion it is positive because people can meet and teach their children everyday to be a good person rathet than go to office or school they will not have much time with their children or family and maybe they will get problem in the way.

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Sentence: However, work and study from Internet are interesting because if the parent work in the home they can meet and teach their children eveyday.
Error: eveyday Suggestion: everyday

Sentence: In my opinion it is positive because people can meet and teach their children everyday to be a good person rathet than go to office or school they will not have much time with their children or family and maybe they will get problem in the way.
Error: rathet Suggestion: rather

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