More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poo

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More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?

Skilled people migration has always been a hot topic for both, low and high-income countries. While richer ones try to attract skilled manpower to satisfy the market needs, poor country try to keep them to ensure the development of internal business. However, as we will see, skilled people movement has its positives for both of them.

Wealthy societies, especially in the market raise periods, are constantly head-hunting people to fill the lack of skilled workers. Since internal workforce is frequently not enough, they have managed to create laws and rules to make the highly skilled workers m...

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Sentence: While richer ones try to attract skilled manpower to satisfy the market needs, poor country try to keep them to ensure the development of internal business.
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Sentence: Despite in the first instance this trend plainly ends to lessen the knowledge available for poor countries' projects, it regularly reverts creating new business opportunities.
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