my family traditions
Before starting to speak about family traditions we should answer to one question. What is family itself?As we know, family is tinge part of socity.And it connected with to our life.Each couple,each family have their essansial patterns. and that manners play nessasery roll which for to grow up children and their moral side. By this way, our family has some traditional patterns.and these count on only us.let me introduce my family traditions.
First of all, Greeting.greeting is essensial manner in our family. If one member of our family comes to house,ones must say to wish healthy and good luck. it means to greeting. As a rule ussually we have supper together, then we watch TV together. At that time,must leave somebody alone. For me it is good manner and I always support it. Beauce this is family itself. Naturally,living together in sadly or lucky days, supporting each others, keeping only love in there and loving each other are notion of family itself. Perpaps,in that case people try to keep it.that kindness, that mutual affection and respect to elders. According to ststistic's report,70& person lives with their family. the results is that, family is sublime gift from natura.different kind of relations have in the world. in the great books mention to the living of together.Even though, some habits have in the house what you unliked. by the way in our house have some events and I do not prefer them.For instant, all member of our family must to wake up early in the morning. and it is immovable habit.Without any doubt everybody make it.Because my father is iron hand.Constantly, he says that Everything must be clearly. For me everybody should wake up when ones wants. For example, I sleep more lete. cause I great passion is to read book in the evening. In that case,I can not wake up early. But our elders do not crave to understand me. Unless, who break down it,ones ponish by elders with caustic words. Naturally,such kind of patterns can behove to bring up childer and it can interact our outlook and behaviors. Because,by these attempt we can bring up a statement,brave and consider person.
Sentence: Naturally,living together in sadly or lucky days, supporting each others, keeping only love in there and loving each other are notion of family itself.
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Sentence: What is family itself?As we know, family is tinge part of socity.And it connected with to our life.Each couple,each family have their essansial patterns. and that manners play nessasery roll which for to grow up children and their moral side.
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Sentence: First of all, Greeting.greeting is essensial manner in our family.
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Sentence: As a rule ussually we have supper together, then we watch TV together.
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Sentence: Naturally,such kind of patterns can behove to bring up childer and it can interact our outlook and behaviors.
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