Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Technological and scientific breakthroughs have revolutionized the food industry, blessing us with a wider choice of food products which are also often sold in ready-to-cook forms. While this has undoubtedly facilitates meal preparations, our heath and cooking knowledge have simultaneously taken a hit.
On the bright side, genetically-modified meat and vegetables last longer, rendering frequent trips to the market a thing of the past. These produce are, furthermore, already cleaned, cut and packaged in smaller sizes, enabling quicker consumption. Moreover, the introduction of microwaveable m...
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