people are getting news through internet. However, newspaper are still sourse if information. Do you agree or disagree?
It has been extremely debatable that popularity of internet to serve the news is capable enough to take place of newspaper or not. Although, availability of internet flourishes gigantic development in the field of news. However, newspaper is still gaining ground. Here, i am personally inclined to the favour of statement that newspaper is a great source of information, today also.
There are manifold points to endorse my views. First and foremost, newspaper is far more economical instead of internet so, buying newspaper is a 'piece of cake' for everyone. Thus, newspaper is used more than int...
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Sentence: In addition, unlike newspaper while reading news on internet, the radiation are not good for our eyes.
Description: The fragment , the radiation is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
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