People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and people should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and people should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that people must be able to save their money that they get and they do not to give tax to government. While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe must pay tax because that is obligation.

Firstly, there are many reasons why do people not want to pay tax. Recently, many people are working at their job and from that they get salary. In many countries paying tax is obligation. However, some people think that they do not want to pay tariff because they prefer to buy something or just want to keep their money for necessity in the future. For example, people waste their money for buying properties and holiday because they think that vacation can make their brain refresh after working or studying. Even though, it can spend a lot of money than paying tax to government.

On the other hand, paying tax is obligation for many people. Paying tax is not only in government but also in the other places. For example, people pay tax in many places, in restaurant, hospital, mall, and books store. There are many places where society pay tax even though they do not realize. As good citizens people should pay tax because it is important for many people. The use of tax is for construction, such as, bridge, pathway, garden, and other facilities that many people use.

In other words, there are many arguments why people pay or do not pay tax, but I believe that paying tax is advantageous for our country and tax is our responsibility as good citizens advantageous.

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Sentence: While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe must pay tax because that is obligation.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to believe and must

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