People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Resources are the basic requirement of the life and they include energy, water, health and many more. Each of them has its own importance and makes the condition convenient and lively. Resources can be bought by money but government has major role in providing them to the people.

Government is the main body for its people and by the people. It looks after the problems of the people and fulfill their requirements. An individual can build his home but construction of roads is the duty of government and the only source of income for it is the tax paid by the people.On every purchase and earning people have to pay tax which is later returned to the people through resources.

However an individual can buy resources according to his income and can lead a better life. Resources provided by government such as roads, health, water, etc are important for every person and without some of these life will be slow. Being in the modern world life would be like as it was in early centuries.

Moreover without tax the government will have no powers and there will be no toll free roads, no economical health system, no government jobs, no security ans safety and so on. Countries will not be governed properly and the economy of the nations will fail leading to disputes and violence.

Considering the matter in fair light paying tax is the duty of every citizen and rule of the states. Tax is right of the government and its duty to return to its people in better way. As rules are for public convenience not for harassment.

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Sentence: Resources are the basic requirement of the life and they include energy, water, health and many more.
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