The pie chart and table below give information on tourist arrivals in Nepal in March 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart provides information where traveler to Nepal came from in March 2008, while the table shows numbers of visitor increased from March 2007.
In March 2008, tourists from Asia and Europe had almost three–quarters of the tourists in Nepal that they donated 38 percent and 37 percent each. Also, America gave 10 percent where North and South America area combined in the percentage of tourists. On the other hand, 15 percent of visitor came from Australia and other regions as remain of percentage.
The percentage of visitors increased 16 percent, by 5910 people, from the same month in the previous year. Almost each region was increasing in number of tourists. More than half of visitors in Nepal were increased from Europe by 3321 people, whereas Asia only increased a small of number.
Overall, Asia was the biggest of traveller in Nepal, while it was the smallest number of visitors increased.
Sentence: On the other hand, 15 percent of visitor came from Australia and other regions as remain of percentage.
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Suggestion: Refer to as and remain
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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