The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ma

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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Given are the charts providing clear information about the causes of worldwide land degradation and the effects of this process on certain regions for the period of 1990s.

A glance at the pie-chart reveals that the main reason of the damage of the land was considered over grazing made by cattle which indicates approximately 35 % and was marginally ahead of deforestation with the indicator of 30 %. Meanwhile, about two fifth of the world area became less productive due to over cultivation, followed by other activities which is 7 %.

Referring to the table it can also be noted that the majo...

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