Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way

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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way

Sport competitions are very popular since ancient as they help people to release stress and switch thoughts. Thus the international sport occasions can promote easing tensions between countries if they hold in a proper way. At the same time if authorities don’t provide safe organization of arranging football World Cup, for example, or Olympic Games it can turn out quite sad.

People like to get together in order to watch football matches or other international sports competitions because it helps people explain proud for their country and display their emotions. For example, many years ago when troops met on the field of honor they chose the best warrior from the other side and the warriors fighted. So, the troop of failed battler considered lost the whole battle. Many people stayed alive and helped their soldier to fight with claims and singing song. I think competitions have the same nature. Citizens explain their treatment towards other nation not through the warriors but through the sportsmen.

However, at present it is not the safest way. It is known that after International Games fans of failed country, especially if that country’s team is a guest, have a habit to break everything to express their fury. To say nothing about supporter fights when people have got serious injuries. It displays that people haven't been satisfied during the game and they need to release bad emotion.

So, I think, that the responsibility for that sort of things lays on the local authorities in particular and on the governments in general. It will be great if people after the game have the opportunity to turn their power in peaceful way. For example, if own team has lost it would inspire for the future competitions: “If we cannot win today we put fourth our best efforts for the nexT time!”. Also, singing helps either.

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Sentence: Sport competitions are very popular since ancient as they help people to realise stress and switch thoughts.
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Sentence: At the same time if authorities don't provide safe organisation of holding football World Cup, for example, or Olympic Games it can turn out quite sad.
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Sentence: It displays that people cannot get satisfaction during the game and they need to realise bad emotion.
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Sentence: For example, if own team has lost it would inspire for the future competitions: If we cannot win today we put forth our best efforts for the nexT time.
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