Radio will no longer be able to hold its presence as television and Internet media will replace it very soon Do you agree or disagree

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Radio will no longer be able to hold its presence as television and Internet media will replace it very soon. Do you agree or disagree

It is true, Radio, Television and internet media are playing important role in today’s communication system and in entertainment. I agree to some extent that television and internet media is effective but cannot ignored the existence of Radio in future.

In urban areas internet media are used a lot on different devices such as smart mobile phone and on laptops. Easy availability and cheap usage plans encourage people to use the internet more in their daily activities and work. As far as television is concerned, it is used more in metro cities, due to availability of cable and Digital Transmission System. In addition, people in urban areas can afford to buy expensive television sets. For example, LED or LCD type of television.

I am unconvinced that radio will no longer hold its existence in the future. It is considered, one of the oldest technologies, used not only for entertainment but also in the communication field, especially on the military battlefield, where television and internet cannot be reached. Due to its radio signal and frequency, long distance calls and communication is made very easy and less expensive. For example, aeroplanes heavily depend on radio signal as an important source of communications. Furthermore, it is extensively used for entertainment. For instance, most of the workers prefer to listen radio and work, consequently, finishing work in a good mood. Farmers working in the farmland can listen radio while cutting his crops. Therefore, radio will never lose its presence for communication or entertainment field.

In summary, I believe radio will always remain as an important source of communication and entertainment, however, television and internet media cannot be ignored.

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