Reading better than watching

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Reading better than watching

From my point of perspective there is nothing high civilization in the world can build without reading habit, due to when a people reading can connected neutron cells in the brain it is can make can make a focus than watching. I have three point why I say reading better than watching. First reason is reading will construct the information in a more structured, reading can do in the any situation, and the last reason is reading can make a people to be a imaginative.

Reading can make brain more construct the information in a more structured. Information in the book thereby more constructed than movie. It is more important especially for kids, when they keep an information by the structured, If they has a good skill reading, they never has problems if must keep information in the movie and probability later they can be a good speaker.

I can read book in the train when I travelling, in the park when I relax, and in the shelter when I waiting the bus. That all can do without electric, and absolutely I do not watch without electric. Not only that but also when I reading, I can repeat if I do not understand, but when I watch television I cannot repeat information when I cannot understand. So in my opinion reading can be flexible than watch.

I am incline to believe that when I reading I can be imaginative. As illustrated by when I read novel I must imagine face, movement, picture, and scene in the novel, it is mean my brain must work hard. In my opinion imagination cannot worked if people always watching, it is because they always see movement, picture, and all of scene directly.

Reading should be a mandatory activity for every body. It is because when I reading, probability later I will be a good speaker, because I have a lot of information. Reading also flexible activity, I can do in every time and every where. Not only that reading can make me be a imaginative person. Albert Einstein ever said “Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.”

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it is can make can make a focus than watching.
Suggestion: Can you re-write this sentence?

Sentence: I am incline to believe that when I reading I can be imaginative.
Description: A verb 'to be', present tense, 1st person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to am and incline

Sentence: As illustrated by when I read novel I must imagine face, movement, picture, and scene in the novel, it is mean my brain must work hard.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and mean

Sentence: In my opinion imagination cannot worked if people always watching, it is because they always see movement, picture, and all of scene directly.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and worked

when I reading
when I am reading

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Different Words: 149 200

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 379 350
No. of Characters: 1703 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.412 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.493 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.708 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.947 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.506 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.368 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.406 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.59 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.187 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5