Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.Which do you consider to be the major influence?

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?

The personality of some peoples are different from the others. The researchers proclaim that it is influenced by the characteristic when we are born. They think that any experiences we may have in our life do not really influence in our character and self development. In my view, there are have many reasons why they thought about it.

The researchers analyze that many factors force how the characteristic we are born to our personality. The first baby born in the world bring the characteristic from their parents such as blood type, DNA and genetic character. The personality from their parents will be down to their children. For example, many people believe that blood type influence the person’s disposition. The people who have blood type A tend to be a sensitive person be compared with blood type O tend to be stubborn person. Blood type B more like adventurous activity and different with blood type AB who prefer to like activity at home. Moreover, parent’s DNA which is given to their kids will develop their ability. The kids who have creative ability in their DNA are copied from their parents. Generally, the musician or designer will give their ability to their sons and daughters. Thus, we can see the personality and self development some peoples from their parents who birth them.

On the other hand, the experiences what we have in our life will influence in our character and self development. For instance, the folk who like travelling a lot and live in some different places tend to be open minded person and tough to face many problems. Likewise, they can enhance their personal ability and characteristic in their society. Then, the folk who have the difficult problem in their life such as get fired from their job or failed in their exam tend to be more patience or maybe they can be depression. So, experiences will be form the person’s personality what they can be in the future.

Overview, all of the factors will influence the persona and self development. I consider that experiences what we have in our life more influence than the characteristics we are born because folk around us have responsibilities with our nature. As a result, the person’s characteristic develop from their friends and colleagues and will to be like people surround them.

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Sentence: Thus, we can see the personality and self development some peoples from their parents who birth them.
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