Research suggests that majority of the criminals who are sent to jail would recommit crime when set free, what do you think is the reason for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The number of serious offenses being carried out by re-offender have increased by more than half in last decade. There could be a lot of reason to push a person to commit crime again and government should implement sensible policy to ensure that when people are released they are not going to recommit crime.
There are several reasons why criminals are committing crime again and again. Ex-offenders face significant barriers to obtaining education, vocational training, gainful employment, housing, substance abuse treatment and mental health services. These barriers often present challenge that...
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