should we use animal testing for medicine,cosmetics,chemicals and food products?
Every year millions of animals undergo painful suffering or death as a spell of scientific result into the effects of drugs,food additives ,cosmetics and other chemical products.While most people think that animal testing is necessary ,but others are upset by what they see as needless suffering. This essay through light on some of the positive and negative aspect of the animal testing.
Many convincing point can be my to support positive consequences of animal testing.First and foremost,many medical treatments and procedures have been developed from experiments on animals .Since animals sha...
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Sentence: They do nit believe that every drug needs to be test on animals ,especially with the huge database of knowledge and and modern computer models.
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