Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education? Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens?

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education? Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens?

The world we live in is home to different people and nations. And not all of those nations have enough wealth to provide themselves with whatever necessary. Countries in the world are different, being wealthy, average and poor. While wealthy nations are hegemonies of the world, poorer nations have difficulty in affording for their people.

I think that every government should take care of its own people, but of course those who cannot fully look after them, should be helped. There are international aid organizations that serve this purpose. For example, the World Bank, the IMF are financial organizations that were founded to loan the countries to stabilize their financial statuses, get over crisis. Many organizations, such as those that were established to help very poor nations, such as people in Africa, generally work voluntarily. Fundraisings go on during the year in helping countries and people help out with money, that adds to the governmental aid.

There are a few reasons that I can show why wealthy countries should help poorer ones. First of all, it's the same globe we live on, and it would be cruel letting a nation through difficulties, perish of starvation, remain ignorant. Secondly, the descend in other countries' economies would affect those wealthy countries, and may lead to world crisis. In order to keep their economies stable, wealthy countries should help to stabilize poorer countries' economies.

Even though there are borders between countries, limits such as languages, culture between nations, people on earth are still one, their home is one, so they should take care of each other.

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