You are hereSome parents and teachers believe that children’s behaviour should be strictly controlled, while others think that children should be allowed to grow up in their own way. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some parents and teachers believe that children’s behaviour should be strictly controlled, while others think that children should be allowed to grow up in their own way. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


Rahi's picture

By Rahi - Posted on 27 September 2013

Essay topic: 

Some parents and teachers believe that children’s behaviour should be strictly controlled, while others think that children should be allowed to grow up in their own way. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

This is a fact that children are our future hope and they’ll make the future, so their upbringing is very important. Although some people believe children’s behavior should be controlled, others think they should grew up freely. I agree both views up to a point.

Actually people’s manner and the way they behave shape in their childhood so it’s very important to control children’s behavior but in a way they don’t feel it directly. Because if they feel you control every detail of what they do, they’ll miss the opportunity to do the wrong things and they won’t learn from their bad behaviors and their mistakes. Moreover, this control can become a habit for them that if somebody control them they behave correctly and whenever they aren’t controlled they behave in a bad way.

On the other hand, we can’t let children to grew up in their own way because they are still young and they can’t recognize what behavior is right or wrong. They need somebody who lead them and warn them about their behavior. Parents and teachers should be aware about the way they treat them because if children feel they are strictly under control they will loose their confidence in the future.

To sum up, both ideas need to be revised. Children need to be controlled but not strictly and in a way they feel they miss their freedom. They should have their parents and their teachers in their sides and learn how to behave in a good way.

Average: 6 (6 votes)
Tags
More essays by this user:
Looking for speaking partner/tutor/chat? Join the instant conversation now!
    
Something about you
Choose a nickname and enter at least one ID (Skype, MSN, QQ, ICQ or Yahoo) if you want to be listed!
Registered users only
Loading...
(125 users watching; 1 users on the list)
People online
Nickname Sex L Country Favorite topics Contact

Topic: Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. pip depp b
Q..The costs of medical health care are increasing all the time. Governments are finding it difficult to balance the health care budget. Should citizens be totally responsible for their own health costs and take out private health insurance? Or it is bett Tessy James sticky icon
The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. michele.gallia
Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others.Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for student who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects shou cretcrety
Many languages are disappearing every year. Is this bad for the world or is it helps unify the human race? indah_hai
The graphs below show the percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant. Dilbar sticky icon
It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific and details to support your answer. HANOPA SELPIANA
Tourism is becoming a good source of revenue to many countries. Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of exploiting this resource. samar sticky icon
Effect of corporal punishment in schools on children dido272000
The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. MOJIONO

Term
Water is a natural resource thatshould always be free.Governments should ban the saleof bottled water.To what extent doyou agree or disagree? drjowelynt IELTS Writing Task II
Write complaint letter to the airline manager regarding the behavior of one of staff members on your flight. In your letter- Give full details of your flight.- Say what the problem with the staff member was.- What would you like the manager to do regardin marzieh IELTS
All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone to what extend do you agree or disagree? elham IELTS
Argumentative Essay: Advantages and Disadvantages of Using the Internet alfitrah8.5 IELTS
Even though globalization affects the world's economics in a very positive way,its negative side should not be forgotten.Discuss dhruv546 IELTS Writing Task II
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young dhruv546 IELTS Writing Task II
Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? dhruv546 IELTS Writing Task II
Forecast increase in world oil production eddysuaib IELTS Writing Task I
Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem.However, it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase.Discuss possible causes for this and its effect on society. marzieh IELTS
Water is a natural resource that should always be free. Governments should ban the sale of bottled water.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Justin sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II

Term
Essay topic:Most of big cities are overpopulated. Why do people still move to big cities? Give your opinion and example. Miachel IELTS Writing Task II
Some people believe that national sport teams and individual men and women who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. Others think they should be funded by non-government ways (such as business, scholarship). What is yo Hao sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
Some people believe children spending time on TV, video and PC games are good, but others believe that is bad. Talk about these two views and give your own opinion. Hao sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. raman nmbrbar sticky icon IELTS Writing Task I
When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is skeet sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
The Percentage of Students Proficient in a Foreign Language djongiskhan IELTS Writing Task I
Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private schools, but other people think that it can have a negative effect. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinions. Hao sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
News editor decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper.What factors do you think influence these decisions?Do we become used to bad news?Would it be better if more good news was reported ? dhruv546 IELTS Writing Task II
The figures below show the proposed plan of an exhibition gallery.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. agienugroho91 IELTS Writing Task I
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while the others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give yo agienugroho91 IELTS Writing Task II

Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private schools, but other people think that it can have a negative effect. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinions. Hao sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
Some people believe that national sport teams and individual men and women who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. Others think they should be funded by non-government ways (such as business, scholarship). What is yo Hao sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
Performance of four different sectors in India between 2000 to 2010 simranvirk sticky icon IELTS Writing Task I
The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. raman nmbrbar sticky icon IELTS Writing Task I
When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is skeet sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
Some people believe children spending time on TV, video and PC games are good, but others believe that is bad. Talk about these two views and give your own opinion. Hao sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
The diagram below shows the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce to reliable forecasts. agienugroho91 sticky icon IELTS Writing Task I
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? xizon7777 IELTS Writing Task II
The Percentage of Students Proficient in a Foreign Language djongiskhan IELTS Writing Task I
News editor decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper.What factors do you think influence these decisions?Do we become used to bad news?Would it be better if more good news was reported ? dhruv546 IELTS Writing Task II
essayE-rater's picture

flaws:
No. of Words: 257 350
No. of Different Words: 123 200

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 257 350
No. of Characters: 1152 1500
No. of Different Words: 123 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.004 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.482 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.204 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 68 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 48 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.597 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.379 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.613 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5