Some people believe city is the best place for schooling, while others think countryside is a better place.Discuss

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Some people believe city is the best place for schooling, while others think countryside is a better place.
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Nowadays, numerous people believe sending their children to modern school in a city is better rather than in countryside, whereas others think the previous idea is dubious because of several matters which I support for.

To them who say agree to countryside's education, allowing their children to attend a village-school is safer than in a city. A lot of advantages could be taken from this choice. For example, according to several researches, country side schools are the safest educational place to prevent children from some modern bad habits; drugs, cohabitation, early smoking and bullying. Countryside students has much more polite than city school students. Those seem a terrific environment to avoid young pupils from problems.

However, other society disagree with the idea.The previous mindset could prove an illusory concerning villagers lack of knowledge because countryside schools have less facilities than metropolitan school. For instance, students in village school is not able to conduct an advance research because their laboratory does not provide enough equipment. Furthermore, city school disadvantages are not possesed by all schools. Merely low quality school which proved that bullying, narcotics and early sex activities are existed. Although, sending children to attend a school in countryside seems excellent to their psychological development, this decision could result in their quality of academic skill which is lower than city school students.

In conclusion, even though, many city education supporters believe countryside is not a good place to develop their children's academic skill. I prefer to choose the countryside because a good moral development as its benefit is more important than academic skills as city school's advantage.

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sending their children to modern school in a city is better rather than in countryside,
Suggestion: sending their children to modern school in a city is better than that in countryside,

To them who say agree to countryside's education,
To those who agree to countryside's education,

Countryside students has much more polite than city school students.
Countryside students are much more polite than city school students.

Sentence: However, other society disagree with the idea.The previous mindset could prove an illusory concerning villagers lack of knowledge because countryside schools have less facilities than metropolitan school.
Description: The fragment society disagree with is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace disagree with verb, past participle

Sentence: Furthermore, city school disadvantages are not possesed by all schools.
Error: possesed Suggestion: possessed

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