Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them.
• In what ways are computers a hindrance?
• What is your opinion?
One of the topics of heated debates among the experts is what effects computers have on people’s life. It is indisputably proven that technology, as we all are aware and no one can really deny, not only makes a fundamental contribution to improving the societies, but also plays a vitally significant roll in every human’s social and individual life. There are number of people believing that computers have more demerits in compare to merits of them and in some ways they are obstacle especially in this century. However the rest are of the point of view that computers are essential implements and living without them is not possible.
Firstly, I would like to mention some of the positives of using computers such as the speed, access to Internet and being convenient. While one is doing a work by a computer, he/she can do 3 more work in a same time for example he can search whatever he does not comprehend on the Internet use calculators. In addition, using computers is more secure because all the programs have been planned. As an instance, financial reports that are provided in excel, undoubtedly are with no mistake and they are more occurred than a manual one.
Furthermore, There are some drawbacks for using too much of them which are getting addicted to them and brain laziness. It seems fair to assume every individual existence tends to be more convenient and insofar as he is able he will use computers to do his works. Thus he does not need to calculate himself or try to remember anything that he forgot he just search it on the Internet finally all these issues lead to not using his mind.
In conclusion I personally admit that every one must be aware of the negative sides of using computers and try to use them in a healthy pattern.
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Sentence: Thus he does not need to calculate himself or try to remember anything that he forgot he just search it on the Internet finally all these issues lead to not using his mind.
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Sentence: It is indisputably proven that technology, as we all are aware and no one can really deny, not only makes a fundamental contribution to improving the societies, but also plays a vitally significant roll in every human's social and individual life.
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