Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the 21st century, whilst tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in the world, its impact on culture has brought about a controversial debate. Both positive and negative sides of tourism from cultural perspectives will be discussed in this essay.
From a positive perspective, the existence of tourism provides economic incentives for the preservation of cultures. This is done through attracting tourists, which incentivises governments to invest in and preserve their history and culture. Moreover, it helps to increase an awareness of indigenous culture which otherwise would...
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