Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Othersfeel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Others
feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is an argument over the issue of whether human activity is damaging the Earth. In myopinion, however, the bad influences are outweighed the good. Human activity is harming notonly the Earth but the living habitats of animals and people as well.

First of all, flood not only demolishes many infrastructures but also takes away people’s life.Because of cutting down trees for cultivation or personal benefits, tree roots cannot hold the soil in place and absorb water from the soil making the soil unable to store more rainwater leading to flood. In addition, deforestation also devastates the living environment of animals affecting to the diversity.

Furthermore, pollution of environment is a serious consequence. Firstly, the toxic from factories and residents pollutes the water, air and even the solid. Lacking of clean water and polluted air cause many troubles for human life. Secondly, several diseases appearing in recent years that still endangers human life. Finally, overuse of resources such as fossil fuels, water, and land contribute to environmental degradation worldwide.

Last but not least, global warming is occurring due to human activity. Human activity has increased the concentration of heat-trapping gases such as methane, nitrous oxide, carbon, and halocarbon. This higher concentration acts as a barrier resulting in higher temperatures, weather changes, ice cover, and sea levels. Climate change not only harms human health but also damages the environment of living things.

In conclusion, people should consider carefully before doing something to minimize bad
influences on the Earth and protect the human life as well.

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Sentence: Lacking of clean water and polluted air cause many troubles for human life.
Description: The fragment air cause many is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace cause with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular

Sentence: In myopinion, however, the bad influences are outweighed the good.
Error: myopinion Suggestion: my opinion

Sentence: Human activity is harming notonly the Earth but the living habitats of animals and people as well.
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No. of Words: 255 350
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.041 0.07

Don't use 'not only, but also' a lot of times.

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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 255 350
No. of Characters: 1363 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.345 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.793 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.466 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.579 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.041 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5