Some people believe that there would be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Crimes are ubiquitous nowadays and being committed not only by adults, children and teenagers are into them as well. Due to that, publics are bombarded with strings of news on rapes, murders, bank robbery and other worrying problems. It also causes the public to be more cautious and as a result, they urge the authority to punish offenders strictly so that the problem won’t reoccur. According to the law, each convict will face the suitable type of punishment for their misconduct but there are few aspects that need to be viewed before the punishment is finalised.
First of all, it is preval...
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Sentence: According to the law, each convict will face the suitable type of punishment for their misconduct but there are few aspects that need to be viewed before the punishment is finalised.
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