Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
-How far do you agree?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, the rates of wage for each careers are depend on how much profit they create, but not including how hard works they do or how is the works contribute to societies. Thus, actors or business bosses are desirable jobs for children of today, in contrast with essential careers of societies which require intensive effort but get low return like teacher or doctor. Many people including me are concerning this momentum.
The reason behind my disagreement on the vogue trend letting market force create price for every career paths is because it will make some decent jobs be neglected. For exa...
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the rates of wage for each careers are depend on how much profit they create,
the rates of wage for each career depend on how much profit they create,
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to say that this trend decreases social potential because important job which contributes ...
Sentence: I accept that excessing sanction from state to economic system may lead societies to be authoritarian and make economic system corrupt.
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.029 0.07
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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
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Sentence Length SD: 7.784 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.541 0.50
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Number of Paragraphs: 4 5