Some people feel that entertainment (e.g. film stars, musician or sports star) are paid too much money do you agree or disagree?
Entertainment industry is becoming the most revenue generating industry. People involved in this industry are getting more money than any other industry. Role of electronic media in this industry is very vital which have created lots of space for stars to show their talents to the public. As for as my opinion is concern I must say that entertainers are getting higher pay than others, because of the popularity in masses. Some people think that they are not earning more money than others.
Despite the fact some people think that starts popularity is limited for a specific period of time and wh...
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As for as my opinion is concern
As for as my opinion is concerned
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As I said that I quite agree
Sentence: Fire fighters, rescue workers and some civil servants are getting much lesser income in comparison with stars, which is I think not fare.
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