Some people regard video games as harmless fun, ever as a useful education tools. Others, however believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks outweigh the benefit.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, ever as a useful education tools. Others, however believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks outweigh the benefit.

It is true that video games are safe and probably have advantages the same as education tools. But i believe there also have more negative effect to the gamers.

Video games can be alternative solutions for many people to remove stress from their job or daily activity. From children to adult, we can find them playing video games at video games center or shop at the rest time. We can also find many video gamers in their notebooks or hand phones. Most of them say that they play games to remove their stress from their job. But many people give the reason why they play video games, because it is their hobbies. Doing hobbies is more advantage than not doing any things. It can also make communities that with the same hobbies. Other advantages are it can be positive in training motor skills, especially in hands motor or reflect.

Playing video games, under our awareness, also give us more negative effect. Many gamers have aims to remove their stress from job, but become addictive now . most of them can spend their time along day with playing video games. It’s wasting time. It should be more advantage by doing something in spending time. Other negative effects are they slowly become apathetic from the others. They usually pull their self from the others and probably have society problem later. Beside that too much playing video games is not good for our healthy, especially for our eyes. Radiation from monitor is harmful for our eyes in a long time. Another negative effect from games are, we always spend our money to buy or play games. How much money have you used to buy for video games? Your money should be used to buy something more advantages. Beside that, there are many video games provide bad content, violence content, sexual content, and the others which are give us bad psychologically negative effect.

In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against video games. However, I believe that there are also have more negative effects to the gamers. So, the gamers should be carefully in choosing video games and don’t playing until wasting many time.

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