Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?

Every year the allocation of funds made by our governments is a commonly argued issue. This means that money prioritization has an utterly role when topics such as health and education and art and sports activities are discussed .In this essay I will discuss if or politics are making the right choice regarding these everyday important factors.

First and foremost, art and sports activities represent entertainment. This cannot be disregarded as it is a great way to escape from the most common disease present in everyone’s life and in our century – stress. For instance, after a hard day work, what better way to relax and relief stress than to take a swimming session on our city municipal pool. Theaters also have an active role in the development of creativity, this means that besides providing a path to relaxation they also stimulate or mind to develop parallel thinking.

Secondly, health and education are considered basic human needs, thus every single government should be considered responsible by providing them. How can any society thrive without satisfactory healthcare providers or good quality schools? In a recent research healthcare facilities and elementary schools are taken as factors by which the development of societies is measured. For example Cabul is the least worldwide developed city mainly because it only has one campaign hospital and none elementary school.

To sum up I finish by saying that this argument only exists because people only look to one side of the argument, therefore only when the recognition of the importance of arts and sports centers, healthcare and education is globally achieved, money can be equally distributed.

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