some people say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extend do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another.
Internet so call the world wide web, a search engine, with the help of it you can reach out and get to know the people you might never have met in person. Degree can be earned, deal can be fixed, you can clear an interview get a job, seek medical advice,plan vacation get the details, buy on line and many more you can do with out going there.
Electronics mail instant messenger , apps, programme, gadgets make the presence of the other person more real, who knows with the help of visual reality you might even get a 3-d image of the speaker. i believe that the internet is one of the best invention of the last century. you can hardly guess to miss anyone and no body is really out of reach.
howeever the internet can also be major source of harasment spammer and hackers can invade your privacy and get personal confedential information, you are never out of anybody search unless you make a concious decision of not checking your email. there can always more works waiting for you in your inbox. and you might not ahve a moment for urself.
Asa family person, i will always looking forward to getting occasional letter in the small mail. a personal letter where i can sense the mood of writer by the slants in his/her handwriting and get to know him/ her. but on the other hand the internet give me all what i dream of in terms of communication, the speed reliability and convenience of time and place i can certainly tolerate the short coming anyday
Sentence: Degree can be earned, deal can be fixed, you can clear an interview get a job, seek medical advice,plan vacation get the details, buy on line and many more you can do with out going there.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: howeever the internet can also be major source of harasment spammer and hackers can invade your privacy and get personal confedential information, you are never out of anybody search unless you make a concious decision of not checking your email. there can always more works waiting for you in your inbox. and you might not ahve a moment for urself.
Error: confedential Suggestion: confidential
Error: harasment Suggestion: harassment
Error: urself Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: concious Suggestion: conscious
Error: ahve Suggestion: have
Error: howeever Suggestion: however
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.375 0.07
Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 268 350
No. of Characters: 1161 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.046 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.332 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.257 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.427 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.589 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.911 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.375 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5