Some people think men and women have different natural abilities that make them suitable for different types of work. Others, however, believe that both men and women can be equally suited to do any type of work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
For centuries, men and women have been deemed fit for certain type of work only. However I believe this is slowly changing and gender is no longer a primary rider for one to choose a career.
An argument can be made that certain types of jobs are naturally suited for a particular gender. These jobs either require physical agility or behavioural expertise that can only be expected from a specific gender. For examples, women are historically known to be more supportive emotionally and can be seen working in professions such as nursing and child care. Similarly men are thought to be more strong...
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