Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss
There are many impacts affecting to the development of children during formative years, especially family and school. While some people believe that parents have the most responsibility on guiding children to be good citizens, others claim that it is the duty of teachers. Both sides of this issue should be discussed in my essay.
It is undeniable that educational environment in school is the best place to strengthen children’s awareness or matureness, and the cognitive processes of children need to be foster systematically. While parents are too busy with their own career, teachers with th...
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Sentence: It is undeniable that educational environment in school is the best place to strengthen children's awareness or matureness, and the cognitive processes of children need to be foster systematically.
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