Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Selected student who want to enter some school is important for some people, in other hand studying together with various abilities also has advantages. This is common present, especially in the big city with many kind of learning method and learning purpose arising.

People who view standardize children ability before entering school commonly wants to get maximum quality of education which maximalist lesson. Essentially, children with same ability can be move together in study with same speed, likewise every child can get their studying purpose altogether.

Studying in kind of ability has benefit in different way; contradictive with the other one, people has concern about the social interaction in learning process. Accordingly people believe that in the social relationship while learning, children can get some insight and social skill, which needed later.

Basically, placement test or not before entering school wisely not to debate. Each other has their own benefit included, thus sometimes people in different view forced other to agree with them, they sure that their view is the best one. Notwithstanding, every parent decide to follow based on their agreement.

In my opinion, both of this way before entering school, same ability or in a narrative is not a complication problem. Wisely, we take requirement assessment of all of aspect, not only readiness from the children itself, but also the capability of parents too. All of this can be combining to get appropriate education for the children.

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Sentence: Notwithstanding, every parent decide to follow based on their agreement.
Description: The fragment parent decide to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace decide with verb, past tense

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