Some people like to travel witn companion other people prefer to travel alone.which do you prefer
As we know,tavel can helps to us which for relaxing,to enjoy, to spend a good time with our friends.Therefore,some people prefer to travel with collegue. However other people like to trevel alone. Personally,I think these two opinions have their adventages and disadventages. I will state my opinion of the following points.
From the one side,traveling with collegue can bring much benifits. First of all,traveling with companion is safer for several reasons. If travels got lost in a strange way back. they can support and help each other if something happened and one of them hurt. As for me Irefer to travel by car. Because I think it is very dengerous to be on a strenge road by one's self. One more reason to have a companion in car is that they can change each other if one of them is tired. Second of all, travelling with companion is more exciting and intresting. they can share all beautiful moments and new expirences. Finally, it helps to save money cause companions can share all exponses on gas, hotels,etc.
On the other hand, travelling alone can bring much benifits too. For exaple one does not have to do things he does not want to. If one is tired he does not have to go to bar with his friend only because he does not want to leave him alone. Moreover sometimes I personally want to be alone and enjoy all beulty around me. I can relax and complatelly contemplate about my life sitting on a beautiful cliff.
To sum up,I think travelling with companion is better.However,sometimes I refer to be alone by my self in a strenge city. It gives me the feeling of adventure and I like that.
Sentence: As we know,tavel can helps to us which for relaxing,to enjoy, to spend a good time with our friends.Therefore,some people prefer to travel with collegue.
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Sentence: As we know,tavel can helps to us which for relaxing,to enjoy, to spend a good time with our friends.Therefore,some people prefer to travel with collegue.
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Sentence: However other people like to trevel alone.
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Sentence: Personally,I think these two opinions have their adventages and disadventages.
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Sentence: From the one side,traveling with collegue can bring much benifits.
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Sentence: Because I think it is very dengerous to be on a strenge road by one's self.
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Sentence: Second of all, travelling with companion is more exciting and intresting. they can share all beautiful moments and new expirences.
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Sentence: Finally, it helps to save money cause companions can share all exponses on gas, hotels,etc.
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Sentence: On the other hand, travelling alone can bring much benifits too.
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Sentence: For exaple one does not have to do things he does not want to.
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Sentence: Moreover sometimes I personally want to be alone and enjoy all beulty around me.
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Sentence: I can relax and complatelly contemplate about my life sitting on a beautiful cliff.
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Sentence: To sum up,I think travelling with companion is better.However,sometimes I refer to be alone by my self in a strenge city.
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