Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss advantages and disadvantages. Give your opinion
As modern society develops, more and more high-rise apartment appears in cities. The effects of skyscraper building on people’s life have been a top of discussions. Some people argue that these high apartments make people feel lonely and unhappy. However, other people believe that this type of apartment own many merits. This essay share look into the pros and cons of such apartments.
High-rise apartments have many advantages over old fashioned apartments. It efficiently uses limited land resource in cities. It is well known that, a severe problem most cities in the world are facing is sho...
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