Some say that TV commercials are useful and others are not. Give your opinion.
Television advertisements take an indispensible part of everyday human’s life. Millions of people, throughout the world watching ads on TVs have become very common. I believe they are quite useful for everybody in their daily routines.
To begin with, materialistic ads on Television are essential for any business to promote their product. They always tend to emphasize the appealing aspect of their product which could be related its quality or promotional discount; these are reached easily to audiences. If a person, for instance, watches such TV commercials, they would avail him or her with...
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Sentence: To illustrate, smoking causes numerous problems which is a known fact to everyone but many smokers do not like to quit smoking.
Description: The fragment numerous problems which is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
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