Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development, Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the development of technology, lots of scientists believe that computers may become more smarter than human beings, which lead to a debate about whether this kind of development is beneficial to the society. In my opinion, its disadvantages outweigh advantages.
It is reasonable to think if we do create this kind of highly intelligent computers, we can benefit from them to some extent. Actually in today's world, most people are likely to pursue a high-quality living standard, so there are labor shortage problems in some careers. If we use computers to finish jobs, especially jobs which ...
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Sentence: For instance, we can built these computers in robots, and order them to clean the street, without hiring human cleaners.
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Sentence: Due to their highly intelligence, they may not only do some simple tasks, but also some complex jobs.
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Sentence: As a result, they could make some people lose they jobs.
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Sentence: As far as I am concerned, another problem is these machines may pose a threat to the safety of humans.
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Sentence: To summarize, creating computers which have higher intelligence than humans are not a good thing, even they can benefit us partially.
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