SOMEONE BELIEVES THAT GOVERNMENT SHOULD PAY THE COURSE FEES FOR EVERYONE WHO WANTS TO STUDY AT UNIVERSITY. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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SOMEONE BELIEVES THAT GOVERNMENT SHOULD PAY THE COURSE FEES FOR EVERYONE WHO WANTS TO STUDY AT UNIVERSITY. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Everyone certain needs the high education and they want to get bright future. Some people believe that government should give money to the course fees for everyone who wants to continue studying in university, but it is not only government must pay but also parents can help them.

It is right that the government should give money to the course fees for everyone who wants to continue studying in university because some people do not have enough money to pay administration in university and the government should appreciate to them and then give some help when they need. They are definite have dreams to become success person and they need continue studying in university for getting bright future.

Sometimes the government only gives a little helping for students who still need money to complete the administration in university, so the parents more important to help what the students need for completing administration in their university or college. I think it can make their more spirit to study and spirit to get their bright future. I believe they can success if get help from government and their parents for getting bright future.

In my conclusion, the government should give helping to students who want continue studying in university and the parents also more influence to support and help the students to rich their dreams become a good people.

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Sentence: I believe they can success if get help from government and their parents for getting bright future.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to can and success
Description: The fragment if get help is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace get with verb, past participle

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