Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think that this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think that this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Many sportsmen are earning exceptionally higher salaries than doctors, research scientist even top politicians. Therefore, it is unfair for them to get incredibly higher salaries than these important professionals. The responsibility to govern he nation is much more complicated than playing a part in any sport for the country. But, sports professionals always have a fear from media that is why the play relatively better.

Professionals such as politicians , always workout to make suitable laws for the citizens of their country and also people those have elected him and sent to the assembly or senate. Their duties are too difficult than any sports professionals because they have to care and make legislation for the better futures of their nation's people. Similarly, the research scientists those perform all the experiments and new things on their own investments; there is no doubt that their work is worthwhile for the whole humanity. According to these examples, it is unjustified that they receive huge salaries. Their large houses and costly cars shows that how mush they earn. The other facilities they get from the government are not shown anywhere, even in the media such as health facilities and others.

On the other hand, every famous sports personality has to face the media encounter. When media discuss their relations and families public-ally. Somehow, it hurts them and also creates many problems in their private lives. Majority of the sportsmen belong from poor families. Their lifestyle is so simplistic. Therefore, high salaries help them to maintain their lives and assist them to make an stable family. The huge salaries they get is the pride and also the price of their performances. And the respect they bring to their country. Sportsmen are few in the country, those build the reputation of their nations internationally. These professionals tested everyday either in the media or in between the viewers.The pressure of both sides they face is uncountable. Moreover, they get a little privacy from media throughout their whole careers.

In conclusion, some people dislike their huge salaries. In my view, by battling with all the pressure they perform incredible. However, their salaries may give them relief and comfort from their workaholic short term professional careers.

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