The table and the bar chart below give information show how journey times in a city centre changed improvements were made to the transport network, and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and the bar chart demonstrate about transport used by inhabitants in a city centre in terms of journey times before and after improvements, also how much the costs using different forms of transport.
The table shows that traveling by bus takes the longest time, it is about 28 minutes before and 23 minutes after improvements. Twelve minutes after improvements put taxi in the quickest transport which is 9 minutes before improvements. Car and tram take 10, 22 minutes before and 15, 16 minutes after improvements. However, Tram with 6 minutes takes the highest significant different after improvements, and the least different is taxi with only 3 minutes.
Taxi which is the quickest transport takes the highest cost per kilometre, € 1.80 on average. Tram and car take € 0.5 and € 1.0 per kilometre. However, Bus is the cheapest transport with only € 0.4.
Overall, journey times relate inversely with cost which have to be spent by travellers. Taxi takes the shortest time to journey. However, bus is preferable transport for inhabitants who prefer to be economical.
Sentence: However, Tram with 6 minutes takes the highest significant different after improvements, and the least different is taxi with only 3 minutes.
Description: The fragment least different is is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace different with difference
Sentence: Car and tram take 10, 22 minutes before and 15, 16 minutes after improvements.
Error: tram Suggestion: train
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
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No. of Words: 175 200
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No. of Different Words: 91 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.637 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.989 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.74 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 7.609 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.68 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
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