The table compares the date of the average household income and expenses in 1980 and 1985 in the USA.It displays figures of incomeand expenses.Expenses further divides into food,housing,medical,entertainment,savings and others.
As we can see from the table,comparing with 1980,income and expenses are both higher,except the last term:others,in 1985.More specifically,the income was $12,000 in 1980,while it was $16,000 in 1985,As the income goes up,the consumption percentage of food,housing and medical is rise and housing expense took the largest proportion by 32 percent in 1985.Entertainment andsavings have the same percentage in this two years,which is exacte 7% and 5%,while other expense took 35 percent,which was the highest proportion in 1980,and it was just 23 percent in 1985.
In a word,people's living standard is improving increasingly,we have much more extra money to do some thing we like.
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Sentence: The table compares the date of the average household income and expenses in 1980 and 1985 in the USA.It displays figures of incomeand expenses.Expenses further divides into food,housing,medical,entertainment,savings and others.
Error: incomeand Suggestion: income
Sentence: As we can see from the table,comparing with 1980,income and expenses are both higher,except the last term:others,in 1985.More specifically,the income was 12,000 in 1980,while it was 16,000 in 1985,As the income goes up,the consumption percentage of food,housing and medical is rise and housing expense took the largest proportion by 32 percent in 1985.Entertainment andsavings have the same percentage in this two years,which is exacte 7 and 5,while other expense took 35 percent,which was the
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Sentence: The table compares the date of the average household income and expenses in 1980 and 1985 in the USA.It displays figures of incomeand expenses.Expenses further divides into food,housing,medical,entertainment,savings and others.
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Sentence: As we can see from the table,comparing with 1980,income and expenses are both higher,except the last term:others,in 1985.More specifically,the income was 12,000 in 1980,while it was 16,000 in 1985,As the income goes up,the consumption percentage of food,housing and medical is rise and housing expense took the largest proportion by 32 percent in 1985.Entertainment andsavings have the same percentage in this two years,which is exacte 7 and 5,while other expense took 35 percent,which was the
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Sentence: highest proportion in 1980,and it was just 23 percent in 1985.
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Sentence: In a word,people's living standard is improving increasingly,we have much more extra money to do some thing we like.
No grammatical errors