The table below shows the consumer durables telephone refrigerator etc owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 2

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The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. [2]

The given table illustrates the percentages changes of usage of consumer durables bought by Britain in the past 11 years.

Comparing with 1972 and 1983, all products percentages have a steadily increase at all. The most popular durable, television, remains its high usage over the prolonged period, 98 per cent owned it in 1983. Other top two popular products are refrigerator and washing machine, which percentages rose 21 per cent and 14 per cent each at 1983.

Some percentages changes during the period because of elimination and invention. At a glance, most of the Britain households were no...

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Some percentages changes during the period because of elimination and invention.
Some percentages changed during the period because of elimination and invention.

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