The table below shows information about travelling to work in one US city.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about travelling to work in one US city in different means of transport which residents use to reach their work in one city in the US.
Inhabitant who use public transport like train or bus also share a car travel with more than one person are the biggest distance on average 23 or 24 miles, while cyclist and walker have 4 miles for the shortest journey. By comparison, car driver in one person inside have 17 miles on averages.
People travelling on trains and buses spend the longest time commuting to work because it take them 49 minutes on averages. Pedestrians and cyclists take the least time, because they get to work in around 20 minutes.
Cars get the fastest way of travelling. People going together by a car have an average speed of 34 mph and people driving alone have an average of 31 mph. walking have the slowest average speed in 3 mph.
In a nutshell, a car is the quickest way to travel for long distance, but for the short distance, walking and cycling is the best way to travelling to work in one US city.
Sentence: People travelling on trains and buses spend the longest time commuting to work because it take them 49 minutes on averages.
Description: The fragment it take them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace take with verb, past tense
walking have the slowest average speed in 3 mph.
walking has the slowest average speed in 3 mph.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 193 200
No. of Characters: 842 1000
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.727 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.363 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.362 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.833 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.437 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.798 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.168 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4