Talk about the pros and cons of capital punishment. What are your feelings?
Capital punishment is a hard sentence for criminals. Nowadays, many countries do not have this penalty, while others continue using it. If we consider this issue carefully, we can find that the death penalty has both advantages and disadvantages. However, in the latter half of the 20th Century, many nations have abolished capital punishment because they have recognized that there are more disadvantages than advantages.
On the one hand, the death penalty gives some benefits for the families of the victims, communities, and governments. Firstly, many victims’ families claim that the death...
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Sentence: Therefore, when those few people who have commited such heinous crimes are sentenced to death, there will be zero possibility for them to commit such crimes again.
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