The teacher's role will remain.(please give me feedback)

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The teacher's role will remain.
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No one can deny the role of teachers in the educational process, but at the same time, There is an important necessity to use computers in classrooms. In fact, teachers can give students a lots of ethics, values and other skills that are more important than just knowledge. In my opinion, I believe that the computer's role is not equal to the teacher's role, for the following reasons:

The first reason is that teachers, usually use a computer to provide the concepts, knowledge and all of the important information. For example:English teacher use the CDs to improve listening and speaking skills, that is happened usually in English lab.

The second reason is that students always can access the new information through browsing the internet during the learning of many subjects such as: geography, math , science and other materials. It is clearly that all learning tasks depend on computer use with help from the teachers. What I mean exactly, that students are doing their tasks under teachers directing.

The third reason is that computers are not able to offers the interactive experience for students, while teachers have ability to transfer their own experience to their students when they teach them without using computer. Although the importance of computer as a help tool in the learning, but it is just a machine to providing an abstract information.

In conclusion, the teacher's role will remain and due to making learning more enjoyment, teachers should use many tools of technology, Including computers ,but at the same time should focus on teach the morals, behaviors, values and the positive attitudes.

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English teacher use the CDs to improve listening and speaking skills, that is happened usually in English lab.
English teachers use the CDs to improve listening and speaking skills, which is happened usually in English lab.

It is clearly that
It is clear that

computers are not able to offers the interactive experience
computers are not able to offer the interactive experience

but it is just a machine to providing an abstract information.
but it is just a machine to provide an abstract information.

at the same time should focus on teach the morals
at the same time should focus on teaching the morals

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