There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter- Describe the event.- Say why you think he/she would be interested.- Suggest an arrangement to meet there wi

Essay topics:

There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter

- Describe the event.
- Say why you think he/she would be interested.
- Suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her

Dear Rahil

We are in last week of year. You know according to customs, in last week of every year on Tuesday night we have celebration that called Chaharshanbeh Soory. People in this night make fire and ignite firecracker. According to belief of people, in this night the bad things leave their life and replace pure things. Nowadays this is a custom and Iranian people like traditions. Anyway we are in Saturday and three days later we have chaharshanbeh soory celebration.

I remembered 2 years ago that you and i part in this celebration. I know you really like it's. Then i made decision that write a letter for you and reminded that. 2 years ago this celebration hold at Bahonar street. But in this year that held in Mellat park.

I saw your mother four days ago. She told me that you will come here soon. I think that we meet each other in Chaharshanbeh Soory. I invite all of our friends. Please call me when you arrived. I will be glad if i see you again.

Votes
Average: 6.5 (2 votes)
Essay Categories

Comments

Sentence: I know you really like it's. Then i made decision that write a letter for you and reminded that.
Description: The fragment that write a is rare

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 11 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.541 7.5

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 176 200
No. of Characters: 756 1000
No. of Different Words: 108 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.642 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.295 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.453 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 23 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.541 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.454 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.2 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4