These charts show the changes in the number of dairy and arable farms in the UK and the changes in the arable crops grown between 2006 and 2011 Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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These charts show the changes in the number of dairy and arable farms in the UK and the changes in the arable crops grown between 2006 and 2011.

Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Given below are the line chart illustrating the amount of farms in the UK namely Dairy and Arabie in between year 2006 to 2011, as well as the pie charts demonstrating different Arabie crops produced in the UK in year 2006 and 2011.

At firt glance, the number of Dairy and Arabie farms remained a stable pattern from 2006 to 2011. While Arabie accounted for only approximately 1000 farms throughout the 6 years, the number of dairy farms was twice of it (2000).

On the other hand, there was approximately one-third of the pie chart was dominated by corn and wheat in the year 2006. While a little less than a third was accounted by wheat, corn and rape seed in 2001.

Generally speaking, despite the wheat production in 2006 being in first place, there was a 6% decline of crop grown in 2011. Similarly, the corn produced in 2006 and 2011 reflected the former pattern, a fall from 32% to 27% respectively.

However, the barley grown during 2006 (12%) have almost similar production in 2011 (11%). Whilst the rape seed grown during 2006 was a little more than one-tenth, the number of rape seed in 2011 was twice of it.

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