The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1987,1991,and 2001.

The pie charts describe the yearly spending by a certain school in the UK in three decades from 1981 to 2001.

In general, it is clearly shown that most of the budget is used for paying educators in the periods of time.

In 1981, teachers’ wages were the highest expenditure rate of 40%, followed by workers’ salaries with 28%, and then Furniture and equipment, and resources were equally the same with 15%. Insurance had the lowest only 2%.

By 1991, similarly, most of money was considered going to teachers’ wages and the number increased moderately by 50%. Others workers’ wages and Resources had the expenditure rates, 22% and 20% respectively. Furniture and equipment decreased dramatically in 5%, while insurance had a slight increase in 3%.

In 2001, teachers’ salaries fell to 45%. Furniture and equipment increased sharply about fourfold in 23%. Other workers’ salaries and resources declined significantly at 15% and 9% respectively. The percentage of insurance rose to 8%.

In summary, it is evident that there are downward and upward trends in some proportions during the three decades.

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