The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate map of an island that has been developed for tourism reason. Generally, there are six features that have been constructed on the island so that made the island is accessible and visitors have somewhere to stay.
Looking at the map in more detail, it can be seen that there are several small huts that have been constructed to accommodate the tourists. In addition, a reception building has been built at the centre of the island, and also a restaurant that considerably has been built to the north of the reception building.
Besides that, a pier has been constructed as a place to dock visitor’s boats. The road has been constructed linking the pier with the reception building and the restaurant, as well. The footpath also has been built as visitor’s way reaching the small huts. Moreover, the swimming zone has been made to facilitate the visitors off the beach on the western of the island.
Overall, all the buildings that have been constructed on the island have a purpose to facilitate the tourists, while the original island were just consists of a few trees.
Generally, there are six features that have been constructed on the island so that made the island is accessible...
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Sentence: Overall, all the buildings that have been constructed on the island have a purpose to facilitate the tourists, while the original island were just consists of a few trees.
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