Write a letter to you supervisor asking for a one-day leave, so that you could help your friend. In your letter
- Describe the problem of your friend.
- Say how you are going to help him/her.
- Suggest how you will complete work tasks on the requested date
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that Friday First of July, I need take break for whole day. I shall be back to work on Monday fourth of July.
My best friend Sara is going to move to London very soon. She is a single mom and has a little boy. She has to complete her master thesis before move, but she cannot because of her son. Unfortunately, her son is on Mari Sent hospital because his leg was broken. I want go to hospital and take care of little John. Besides, I want to give a hand on packing and help her to finish her thesis.
I will try to complete my tasks before Friday. However, I will have full access to the internet at during this time, so I can finish my uncompleted duties via the internet and send my daily report to you.
I will like be glad if you can kindly accept my request.
Yours faithfully,
Mari.
Sentence: I will like be glad if you can kindly accept my request.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', infinitive or imperative
Suggestion: Refer to like and be
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.364 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 615 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.892 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.055 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 15 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 8 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 2 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.613 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.254 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4