Write a letter to your English friend about a movie that you are planning to watch. Pleas say:
- What is special about this movie?
- How is it related to your friend?
- Suggest an arrangement to see this movie together.
Hi Anne.
I recently heard about new movie called pride and prejudice. It has a romantic genre. I was told the story is about two people that introduce to each other in dance party. They involve withe a misunderstanding. Finally they fall in love.
Movie 's director has realized beautiful scenes and mansions of 19th century in England. I really like English novels written at the time.
By the known of you, I think you will like this movie. I know you interested in novel. Specially novel of Jane Austin and Emily Bronte. I remember we studied the Jane Eyre together.
Since you are studying in art university and want to make movie in future, I offer you see it.
I planed for going to cinema in my mind. I have a surprise for you. I have already got two ticket for Sunday. Please think about my plan.
call you later.
Sentence: They involve withe a misunderstanding.
Error: withe Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
Sentence Length SD: 4.145 7.5 (need more compound or complex sentences)
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 145 200
No. of Characters: 628 1000
No. of Different Words: 99 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.47 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.331 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.39 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 38 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 25 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 9.062 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.145 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.188 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4