Write a letter to your landlord about the neighbors above your flat that are disturbing and say that you wish to make a complaint.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about one of my neighbors who live above my flat.
I am living on unit 231 St. Jane block for several years and during this time I have not had any problems with my neighbors. Last month someone rent an empty apartment that located above of mine. At the beginning everything seems to be normal and other neighbors and I had not any complain, but it does not continue so long. The first problem was his night parties that started at first week of his moving. He always has party and his gust make a lot of noise especially in the midnight. I am a student and I have to get up early to go to university. Besides, when I am at home I must study, but now I cannot even sleep at night.
Moreover, he has a dog and most of the time he bark. Even he bit some of neighbor, so all of us afraid to go to our yard. I think this matter deserver your urgent attention. Ideal solution is you talk with this neighbor and give him a deadline to eliminate this noise.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mari.
Sentence: He always has party and his gust make a lot of noise especially in the midnight.
Description: The fragment gust make a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
he has a dog and most of the time he bark.
he has a dog and most of the time he barks.
Sentence: I think this matter deserver your urgent attention.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to deserver and your
Sentence: Ideal solution is you talk with this neighbor and give him a deadline to eliminate this noise.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and you
Sentence: I think this matter deserver your urgent attention.
Error: deserver Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 199 200
No. of Characters: 800 1000
No. of Different Words: 127 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.756 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.02 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.259 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.967 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.342 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.15 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4